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Harold Rhenisch
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The Opening Paragraph
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This is the one that counts. |
Most short stories, novels, and works of creative non-fiction use the opening paragraph as an introduction to the main themes of the work, and especially to the sub-plot. In this linked (and fun!) series of exercises, students produce a short story, an opening paragraph, and a poem, based on the opening and closing sentences of a famous short story. Behind the fun is a piece of seriousness: a publisher who receives five manuscripts a day does not, really, have time to read them. Often, the first paragraph is the only one which is read. The purpose of this exercise is to increase your chances that it will be, as well as paragraph two, page two, chapter two, and right to the end. |
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To develop character, to drive plot, to keep the point of view clear, to set up symbolic resonance, to foreshadow, to develop irony, to develop character and tension, dialogue is the most versatile and powerful tool in a writer's toolkit. In this workshop, you will learn how to use the tool, and what it is capable of doing. |
Dialogue is the cleanest fuel. |
The Art of Revision
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Writing and revising are two separate arts. |
Many books about writing discuss how to generate words. Few talk about what to do next. This workshop does just that. It starts from the premise that writing is an act of seeing the world through words, while revising is the act of seeing the words for what they are on the page. It is the art of possibilities. |
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This series of exercises is designed to guide writers through the act of seeing. Just as a painter builds a palette out of a variety of media, applied on a variety of surfaces, with a variety of brushes and textures, this is the heart of writing, combining free association with close attention. When the words won't come, this will lure them out. |
Snow is not white. Water is not blue. |
Replacing Abstractions
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Abstractions are useful shorthand. They are also doorways. |
The language we speak is a colloquial language, a great distance from the one we use when we write. These exercises are designed to bring the two closer together, so that the large, abstract concepts we banter about connect directly to our lives and our world. History is in perception. So is philosophy. Writing is about how to live. In this workshop, I will show you how to open the door. |
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Visual poetry and 20th Century traditions of imagery, Chinese translation and surrealism, Esperanto and sound poetry, all got their start during the First World War, then they went their own separate ways. I will show you how to put Humpty Dumpty together again, to use these separate arts to step away from writer's block, to clarify the directions of your writing, and to speed up the process of discovery. |
We see with the body, but the mind writes. Not always! |
What is Creative Non-fiction
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Creativity differs from invention. |
Creative non-fiction is classically defined as non-fiction written using the techniques of fiction. Sounds great, but if you google around the virtual universe, you will quickly find that, on the ground, it often means a kind of sleepily jazzed-up journalism. Using the models of Kapuscinski, Chatwin, Lindqvist, Dillard, Magris, Glavin, Kishkan, Gayton and Rhenisch himself, this workshop explores a more fruitful foundation in notions of reading the world and of transformation. |
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In this playful workshop, no word is sacred and no word is safe from being twisted into new shape, tickled, teased, caressed, thrown into deep water, or being put into a cake and asked to jump out singing salsa. Seriously, though, many beginning writers trip up otherwise powerful pieces by choosing words with different backgrounds. Our language, English, is a kind of United Nations, a kind of layer cake. This workshop show how to keep the cream out of the cherries, and the chocolate on top. For writers interested in translation, the workshop continues by showing how these techniques can be used to escape the straightjacket of expected readings, so that what is translated is not a dictionary, but a living voice. |
Every word we write is an act of translation. |
Prayers and Spells
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Poetry is sacred. |
Poetry is not a literary art. It is older than that, and does direct work in the world. In this workshop, we do that work, together. |
From McFadden to Lorca, from Kroetsch to Heaney, from Homer to Strand and Pound to Lillard, one of the oldest forms of poetry is alive and well in our time. This workshop explores the tradition, and shows how it works, with a series of techniques that can break open the most difficult, closed-in ideas, into poems, dialogues, and even witty, accessible stories. |
One thing leads to another. |
Trickster Work
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The clown is the centre of the ceremony. |
Tricksters are ofen associated with native spiritual traditions: Anansi, Coyote, Raven, Rabbit.They also, however, belong to Western traditions: Hermes, Falstaff, Puck,Mozart, Aristophanes, Eminem, Edson, and a thousand others, at least. This workshop explores the power of the trickster at the heart of all notions of identity and morality. Using the model of Bruce Chatwin's The Songlines, it leads you to reading the world as story, and your story as the world. You will learn to make stories and poems like a pinata, and then to start swinging with a blindfold. You are allowed to cheat. |
This workshop joins world spiritual traditions with the specific spiritual strengths of poetry. It is an act of liberation and reverence. For more information, please see my Spiritual Editing page. |
The world is a spiritual fire. |
A New Genre
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The new genre of the 21st Century is amongst us. |
Fiction that appears to be non-fiction, non-fiction that appears to be fiction, virtual work that appears to be real, work in real time which appears to be virtual, drama that appears to be social documentary, social documentary that masquerades as poetry, poetry that is constructed like drama: what is going on? Something new, that's what. This workshop explores the roots of the new genre, maps out the world it is designed to support, and shows the forces lined up against it. The future is now. |
From Marco Polo to Your Home Town
Marco Polo went to China,came back to Venice, and wrote about it. Italo Calvino read Marco Polo, and wrote his masterpiece, Invisible Cities,based on Polo's example.This workshop will show you how it is done, and how these techniques can be used to free you up to write about the world in which you live. It teaches the important skills of focus, and demonstrates how mythology and a naive voice can be used to great effect in showing the hidden connections in the seemingly everyday world. |
Travel to the ends of your metaphors. |